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Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 12.
I know this was quick, I actually posted chapter 12 before 11 by accident! Hehe, so I put up 11 and waited a few days. Chapter 12 is officially my ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Revising Hope, Chapter 3
IM BACK! Miss me?(; It had been exactly 42 hours since Hope’s first encounter with Pretty-boy, or Jeffrey as she know knew him, and she had been avoiding him at ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Revising Hope, Chapter 2!
HIYA AGAIN! Okay, let's get started! They certainly were not like what she had felt for Raymond-or, Ray Ray as she had affectionately called him. No need for that last ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Revising Hope, Chapter Un
Hiya, Beauty and the Fish! I'm Olivia(: Anyways, here's my review: When Hope finally finished her relentless mourning, she pulled herself up slowly so that she could look out the ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 11.
I hope to.
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 11.
WARNING: This does contain a sexual scene, but it doesn't describe it. You just know what's going to happen. I lay beside Aaron in the comfy sheets of our bed. ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Hey.
Haha yes, I know Sean(: *Im a big sports fan*
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Hey.
Hello, Sean! And welcome to the YWS! Don't forget to read the rules and make sure you understand the 2:1 ratio! My name's Olivia and here at the YWS, we're ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: What Lies Beneath the Fallen Rain
This was a short story I wrote for a contest... but I've grown to like it so much, I wanted your opinions and reviews(: “Ahh!” A piercing scream burst it’s ...
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 10.
Hahaha!
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 10.
WHOA. Im so happy at how fast this is going:D I want to think Kat [alwaysawriter] for helping me with this chapter. BIG HELP:D Thank you!! Carly and I made ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: My story~my shot at love (edited)
Wow Kat. Just-wow. Kat says: I reviewed a story when I first woke up; I check YWS first thing in the morning and read the PM that Heather sent me, ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 9.
WOW that was fast. Im really into finishing this story up. There's going to be about 16 Chapters(: Possibly more, but there's a sequal so I don't know. Anyways, enjoy! ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 8.
I rose my head off the soft pillow, eyes squinting from the sudden amount of light entering my pupils. I whipped my eyes and sat up straight. Down on my ...
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (1)
Well, I'm confused. This is a prologue, so will the chapters explain what got them to that point, or will they explain what happens after this point. Making me have ...
Aug 10, 2008
